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Post by Haazen on Jul 13, 2009 12:44:23 GMT -5
*Haazen's arms folded in front of him as he watched the Phoenix made of black flames swooped down constantly and engulf the forest in darkness. Tree's were burning upon touch, others were catching because of the flames heat, and among it all the most satisfying were the screams of pain and suffering that could be heard from anyone living or passing by the forest as it was tore down part by part. His mask shined, his yellow eyes flickered, and the now slightly revealed bones in his body glimmered a dark red as they all faced the flames of the Phoenix.*
*Haazen watched the predicament below as he strted to answer back to Cerberus.*
Chapter 4, is fine but its just so plain. I'd much rather something with a little more creativity to it.....something that describes what is happening here more effectively.
Hmmmmmm how about, "The Symphony of suffering?"
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Post by Cerberus on Jul 13, 2009 15:43:01 GMT -5
*he swings his guitar to a playing position and strums a note, making the forest shake violently, covered by the screams of elves running from the flames and trying to put them out with their futile efforts with buckets of water*
symphony of suffering? I like that, very nice, now lets get started! HA!
*he raised his hand to the air and a pick faded into his fingers from the shadows, his fingers dragged across the neck of the guitar making fire run off the body. but then, he brought the pick down, and the song began, from the very start, the chaos effects of the instrument was making themselves known, the ground cracking around him, the horrible feeling of having your soul pulled out felt by all, Haazan and Jaz would be feeling it harshly from the distance they were standing at.
Cerberus's guitar was now roaring the stead beat he was strumming, it was a rhythm, a rhythm of summoning. underneath the sounds of Cerberus, was the sounds of others, another guitsr could be heard harmonizing with Cerberus, a bass could be heard bellowing along with them, and the sound of drums pounded against the ear drums.
the entire forest had become dark, now, tornado funnels had become forming overhead, black lightning, crashing against the ground. it was not long before the source of the other sounds began to make themselves known as well, the ground shattered further around Cerberus, and finally, it was time, time to bring the band, to the left of Cerberus, a stream of black lightning struck the ground and made earth and sparks explode everywhere, the stream was constant, punishing the ground.
the stream suddenly stopped, a deep hole in the ground, it was not even a moment before a bony hand reached out from the darkness of the burnt earth and began to rise, it was tall demon, and was nothing but a skeleton, a black hooded cloak appeared on it's body. it reached into the ground and pulled form the pit it came from, another guitar, similar to the one that Cerberus himself had in his hand.
yet again more lightning, two streams of power lashed the ground and made it explode and send chunks of earth everywhere, some hit the car Jaz was sitting in. Cerberus was seen laughing to himself, but the noise was to loud for him to be hear, two more holes apeared, one behind Cerberus, an one that was to his right, the one to his right took out a heavy bass guitar, and rose it high before playing along with cerberus again, the hole behind him burst open further as a drum set levitated out, with a demon sitting on the throne, sticks on hand, and began to play, the demonic energy of all four was strong, so strong it began to become visible, a black swirling aura with a red tint to it.
after they were all there, the steady rythm began to move to the verse, the loud music of the demons suddenly becoming louder, able to be heard by the entire forest, probably past that, the force of the sound making the flames push back and the power pushing against the pheonix as it flew, rain and large hail falling from the sky.
Cerberus was seen opening his maws, two rows of fangs lining his mouth, and he began to sing, sing for the forest, the phoenix, to the souls of the elves, calling them to be his sacrifice*
give me your hand, blood was spilt and men will follow!
death into his hands punishment to great to bear
*the landscap was becoming warped as they played on, the wind had picked up and was ripping trees out of the ground, sweeping elves off their feet and taking them to the sky. some elves were sen simply dropping dead, a white substance coming from their bodies and circling the rising energy of the demons.
the ground underneath them began to rise like a plateau, taking them higher and higher as Cerberus sang on*
raise, your hand, and taste the courage
harmonized"the one of light!"
fall from grace, unholy night
*a black mist began to roll off Cerberus's body, his eyes gleaming with a malicious delight, the amount of souls torn from the living growing in size, circling around them*
i've come here to kill you, won't leave untill you die! murder point of vengance, I close my bothers eyes!
tonight
*the other demonic guitarist came in with Cerberus and began to play dual harmonies with him, black lightning from the sky was called down and ripped through the terrain, incinerating those in the way, the pulling feeling at the souls of the living was now a burning yanking, Cerberus's aura literally tearing them away, gale force wind was still ripping at everything, the hail and rain punishing like thousand of knives.
Jaz would be safe in the car, Haazan would have to fend for himself on the outside. tremors off setting the ground, making it break apart and tear, and with that Cerberus boomed back in with his voice, singing to the forest*
give me, your hand, blood is spilt and men will follow
death into his hands, a punishment to great to bare
raise, your hand, and taste the courage
unison "the one of light
fall from grace, unholy nights
i've come here to kill you, won't eave until you die, murder point of vengeance, I close my brothers eyes, tonight!
*the dual harmonies came in again with the same harsh tones as before, but this time rang in the voice of the drummer, screaming the lyrics and causing the storm to flare and bring down several tornado funnels from the sky*
it's cold tonight as the bastard made it it, from my hands to my brothers grave! you'll choke inside, you'll shock his gift, feel the power of a fallen pact!
christ falling down!
*the roar of the drummer was heard as the guitars sound became dominant, as did Cerberus's voice, it was loud, booming, the sound of bells were heard in the sky, ringing from the beautiful destruction created by his hand, the ground began to shake harsher and harsher as the next verse was sang*
far, away in this land I must go! out of the sight of the world a punishment sent from his hands! a hardship that no one should know, no, no, no, out of the sight of the world!
away in this land you must go
*dual harmonies once again dominate the sound of destruction, the amount of souls around them ahd grown into the hundreds, some elvs were committing suicide to stop cerbeurs from tearing their souls away, some were burned alive, some were destroyed by the lightning, crushed by trees, taken by the fierce wind and thrown across the forest, cut to pieces by hale, but one way or another, anything within the sound of Cerberus's symphony would die, was dying.
the drummer came back in with the roaring sound of his voice, along with a solo played by Cerberus himself taking more lives and adding them to their collection, and building up to the end*
where has he gone what have you done! a voice commands from high above this earth, and when the soilent blood calls out, to me! never! never! it's all the same!
*there was a ear shattering tremor and a cracking began to form at the base of the large rock that Cerberus was playing on, as they all played in unison, the crack tore through the forest and began to grow larger, turning into a massive fissure that consumed all in it's path in a massive pit of nothing but death, the end of the fissure could not be seen from where they were, it was to large, the music gave dramatic presence to it's creation, and Cerberus's voice could be heard as it grew*
far, away in this land I must go, out of the sight of the world! a punishment sent from his hands, a hardship that no one should know! no, no no, out of the sight of the world!
out of this land we must go!
* and with that, the souls all were drawn into Cerbeurs's guitar, hundreds of bodies could be seen, torn, bleeding, dead. nothing but carnage for miles, nothing but sweet sweet chaos*
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Post by Jaz on Jul 13, 2009 22:57:08 GMT -5
*Jaz had been sitting in the car when everything began. She covered her ears, and as the music became more and more intense, she squeezed her eyes shut as well. She couldn't stand it. She could hear them dying, screaming... Finally she broke, shaking her head, and yelling at Cerb.*
"Cerberus! Stop! Thats enough!"
*She knew her screams were falling on deaf ears. He was wrapped up in the sound. The wind whipped around the car, causing it to sway and move. She sat in the passenger seat, the blanket wrapped tight around her, her eyes firmly closed. She couldn't listen any longer...*
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Post by Cerberus on Jul 13, 2009 23:20:10 GMT -5
*the rain and the hail calmed as the song ended, Cerberus stood atop his pedestal looking at his work,water dripped off his silver hair, the clouds were spinning in a hurricane style, it was beautiful in his opinion. he hopped down from the raised section of rock he was on and strides over to his mustang, very casual, like he just got done playing a show at a bar, he tapped on the window and it rolled down, he leaned on the side and laughed a bit*
enjoy the show Jaz?
*he sounded like he had just walked through a park*
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Post by Jaz on Jul 13, 2009 23:33:16 GMT -5
*Jaz glared at him from across the car. Her words were laced with venom.*
"You're such a phoney Cerberus. Don't think killing innocents like this will actually lead me to believe you're evil. Its an act.. Now leave me alone."
*She was furious with him, and aching at the loss of so many. She couldn't believe what had just happened, she couldn't grasp it...*
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Post by Cerberus on Jul 13, 2009 23:44:15 GMT -5
*Cerberus laughed still*
a bit angry are we?
*he looked at the warped plain that use to be a strip of the forest and smiled*
I didn't want to get you all pissy, I just wanted to know if you enjoyed the show, geez
*he enjoyed messing with her, it was his passion, a past time, and he wanted to see how many buttons he could push*
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Post by Jaz on Jul 13, 2009 23:51:10 GMT -5
*Jaz kept her eyes straight ahead, her arms folded. She wasn't speaking to him. He was trying to piss her off, get a rise out of her... He'd pissed her off alright, but she wouldn't giving him the satisfaction of another outburst. So she blatantly ignored him. She didn't care what happened now. She hope the Guardian came out and kicked everybodys butts... just not hers...*
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Post by Cerberus on Jul 14, 2009 0:09:29 GMT -5
*he nudged her a bit with his finger*
oh come on, we have at least...like...five ten minutes before the guardian senses all that, can't we talk?
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Post by Jaz on Jul 14, 2009 0:12:49 GMT -5
*Jaz glanced at him incredulously, her arms folded stubbornly.*
"I don't want to talk to you."
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Post by Cerberus on Jul 14, 2009 0:21:09 GMT -5
*he shrugged*
well you just did so to bad
*he smirked and looked at the massive fissure that served as the grave of what was probably in the hundreds*
a compliment would at least be nice
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Post by Jaz on Jul 14, 2009 0:26:10 GMT -5
*A compliment?! Her anger peaked and she turned to glare at him. It appeared he would get her outburst, as planned.*
"Cerberus - what you just did - it was awful!... And I hope the guardian kicks your ass..."
*That was all she said - it was all that mattered..*
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Post by Cerberus on Jul 14, 2009 0:29:25 GMT -5
*he shrugged*
eh, good enough I guess, and you might get your wish, the guardian feeds of the energy used to call it, this might get epic
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